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Post by GabrielaJade on Aug 10, 2004 13:17:15 GMT 10
I started to write poetry when i met one of my friends cousins half brothers and i instantly liked him,we didn't see each other for about 4 years then he came and visited his half brothers dad,I got to spend a day with him on the four wheeler and i told him that i liked him and he said he did too,but I thought he ment as a friend and I told him that and he said that no he liked ,e as more then a friend.we kissed that night and i thought everything was well until i got home and got grounded for going to get gas with him for the four wheeler without asking for permission to.I never saw him again after that,it was 2 or 3 summers ago.after he left i started to write and it was my way to coape with what i was going through.I just thought I would give a little back ground on my poetry.I am sorry if they are not that good.
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Post by GabrielaJade on Aug 10, 2004 13:23:37 GMT 10
Here is my first one:
The letter
I've been thinking about this lately
If we were to meet again would your feelings be the same or like mine?
I hope so and then we could be together at last
I do love you,the person you are
I miss you so much it hurts
I can't get over you no matter how hard i try
I truley care about you
I miss you and hope i can see you soon
Love,
Me
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Post by GabrielaJade on Aug 11, 2004 0:40:47 GMT 10
Here is one more for right now and it is not about the guy.
it is called Frustraition
I am so frustraited
I can't seem to suceed
I try but just can't
I can't seem to ask for help
it does not work
I am really frustraited
I want to understand
Do you think you could help me
Please Help me to understand and suceed!
It is not the best i know
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Post by Thorn on Aug 11, 2004 21:40:18 GMT 10
Do you still love this guy even now?
I like the simplicity, poetry isnt always about pretty metaphors and symbolism or clever rhyming its about how you feel.
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Post by GabrielaJade on Aug 12, 2004 0:44:53 GMT 10
A part of me is always going to love him,I just have learned to move on. I have a feeling that I am never going to see him again.
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Post by wishlesshollow on Aug 14, 2004 12:02:55 GMT 10
i agree with thorn. i like them for the way they are purely about the emotions. they show who you are as a person and you dont hide it. it is a admirable quality in a person. i am glad that i got to read your poetry finaly.lol. i think you are brave to put them up when they are obviously a important part of your soul. i Know how it feels for me having someone i will always love but trying to move on *bows*  wishlesshollow |
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Post by GabrielaJade on Aug 16, 2004 11:35:32 GMT 10
Thank you,I will post more when I can find the binder I have them in(that is the trick though...finding them  ) |
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Post by wishlesshollow on Aug 19, 2004 12:01:45 GMT 10
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Post by GabrielaJade on Sept 26, 2004 9:10:23 GMT 10
This is not one of my coaping poems,I am still looking for the binder.  This is one I wrote last night for a new guy that has fallen in love with me and I have just realized that I have fallen in love with him as well. *It has taken me about 1 or 2 years to really move on and fall for someone else* Here it is: As I sit here and wounder what to tell you exactly, I can not stop thinking of how greatful and happy I am to have met you. You are so wounderful, I thinkof you everyday and can not wait to see you soon. You have always been there for me,and I you. I am so happy that God put you in my life. Everything I have told you is true. I would never lie. Thank you so much for not giveing up on me. I love you. I can not imagine myself with anyone else right now - and maybe never,Who knows but I do know about now and now I know I truely care about you. *I know a little sappy,it was kindof late when I wrote it,but I was also in the moment  * |
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Post by GabrielaJade on Oct 5, 2004 9:36:55 GMT 10
You can forget about the above poem,I ripped it up since the guy turned out to be a big  hole a few days after I wrote it. I wrote a different one because of what he did,it is pretty angrey,you can deffinatly tell I was pissed and it pretty much explains what happend...I don't know if I am going to post it though..I might. |
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Post by Petronia on Oct 5, 2004 11:50:17 GMT 10
I enjoyed your poem above. Yet I am sorry that things did not turn out for you the way you hoped.
People tend to change before our very eyes. There are times when someone I thought was great turned out to be nothing like I thought they were.
I would really like to read your other poem even if you send me an IM with it if you dont wish to post it here.
I hope that you do not remove the poem above.
Petronia
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Post by GabrielaJade on Oct 6, 2004 9:42:55 GMT 10
Thank you Petronia, his old friend from high school has seen him and thinks it is college that has changed him and I agree,he turned out to be a toally different person then who he was in high school and when I first met him. I wasn't shure if I sould post it because it has quite a few cuse words in it, but I might. Thank you again.and I will not delet the other one...I promise.
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